2008年10月19日日曜日

MY PERFECT PARTNER

My perfect partner must like something and have personality trait. First, he must like playing sports. I'm not good at any sports, but I like playing sport very much. For example, basketball, soccer, softball and so on. Second, he must like watching movie. If he likes movie, he agree about movie with me. Especially, I like Science Fiction. Third, he must like Japanese comedy. I like "Down Town", "Summers", "Taka and Toshi" and so on. People likes comedy is funny, so I like them. Fourth, he must be a honest. I don't like him if he tells a lie, but If he tells a joke, it is OK. I want to trust partner. In short, If you become my perfect partner, you like playing sport, watching movie, comedy, and you're honest.

1 件のコメント:

teacher さんのコメント...

Very good. Try not to use "an so on" This is used a lot in Japanese, but not in English. Also, be careful of your plurals. You like to watch "movies". Your introduction sentence is a little weak, but the rest of your paragraph is very good (8/10)