I like to travel, so I have a lot of memory about my trip. First, I went to France two times in my 4 and 11 years old as family trip. When in my 4 years old, I hardly remember but I remember I made friends with Masyu. He is my best friend in France. When in my 11 years old, I went to Orsay museum because my parents has been teaching art in their high school, so they are interested in art, but I'm not. Orsay museum is so large. We went to its cafe and especially I remember I ate ice cream there. It is very good. Second, I went to Okinawa in my 15 years old as school trip. I learned Okinawa's history, and I ate pineapple and swam beautiful sea. Third I went to Australia in my 17 years old as school trip. I staid with a family. I brought "HANAFUDA" that is Japanese card game and played with a family. They enjoyed playing it. Next day, I went to zoo then I saw a kangaroo of my first time. Kangaroo was so big. This three trips became my memorable trips, so I never forgotten these trips.
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'These three trips...' Please correct this! 'I will never forget...' 'I have a lot of memories' These are simple mistakes. Your information and form is very good. Please use (In short or In conclusion) to begin your concluding sentence. (8/10)
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